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I don't know how to reword this:

Along the way, we see how the faults
Jacob made earlier in life are
repeated back on him.

I know

repeated back on him

doesn't sound correct, but I don't know what to replace it with.

Any ideas?


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How about "...we see how Jacob repeats the mistakes he made earlier in life?"


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we see how the faults Jacob made earlier in his life begin to bleed back into his existence, recurring endlessly like an abyss in trepidation, an inflatable nightmare; draining through fading, whispered telephone conversations in the winter drear.


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first of all, it's "the mistakes" he made — one doesn't make faults

are revisited upon him
return upon him
come back to bite him in the [tuchus]
come back to haunt him
come home to roost
beat a path back to his door [a play
on "if you build a better mousetrap,
the world will beat a path to your
door"]


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