: Is there a different term for "Casket lowering device"? I was writing something like: She stood in front of two open graves as the casket lowering devices slowly creaked in unison to what seemed
I was writing something like:
She stood in front of two open graves as the casket lowering devices slowly creaked in unison to what seemed like eternity.
but it seems unnatural. Or out of place. Can you help me?
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Cranks?
She stood in front of two open graves as cranks lowered the caskets, creaking in unison to what seemed like eternity.
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