: Re: Describing a strong sexual attraction (on first sight) I wish to describe strong physical attraction on first sight by a human towards an alien. A Human meets an Alien but the Alien is extremely

@Megan928

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There's too many adverbs and phrases that are equivalent to adverbs (of that there was no doubt). Why not show, rather than tell? Something akin to:

'Their features were soft, inhumanly so. As strange as it was, humans were outright ugly compared to them.'

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