: Re: How do you construct a thesis statement? I have read any essay making tips and they said that the thesis statement is key to the thesis. So I tried to make one based on a question. So assume

@Connie138

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I am pretty sure this isn't a proper question for this site, but I will answer.

First, it's "I will argue" and not "I will arguing."

Second, it's "cause unemployment" or "cause increasing numbers of unemployed workers" or "lead to a higher rate of unemployment."

But that's just grammar (I assume English is not your first language as these are things a native speaker wouldn't get wrong, especially not the first one).

Make your thesis statement stand on its own. Don't tell the reader it's a thesis statement. So no "In this essay" or "I will argue." Just tell us what overpopulation does to urban areas. Then prove it.

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