: Why am I asked to revise this statement? This statement is an introduction to the review of related literature chapter for my case study at school. Maybe presents is a better word for accounts,

This statement is an introduction to the review of related literature chapter for my case study at school.

Maybe presents is a better word for accounts, but that's it? The style is OK for a formal work, and I have also seen this pattern in the introductory statements of other literature.

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I think that the statement is very generic. It could be used on just any review in any topic. Make it more specific. Or remove it given that it is essentially content-free

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This chapter is about {name of topic}. It accounts and evaluates {specific names of works, main ones if too many}. We find that case studies address/show {specific problems}.

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