: Re: How can I trim my word count and still be proud of what I've written? I am a new writer. My work is focused on real people. I ask a series of questions and go from there. Its all about

The problem is you are asking us how you can erase 75% of your writing.
We can't help you. If it was 25%? Sure. 50%? Maybe. 75% isn't possible if you still want it to be the same thing.
In this case, I recommend starting from scratch and making an outline that you follow to a Tee. Pick one event in that person's life and write about it. Do not use adjectives or adverbs unless mandatory for accuracy. Do not be afraid of 3-4 word sentences. Try to avoid going over 7 words in a sentence when possible. Always try to find a way to use contractions when possible. (i.e "Michael is going to the store" -> "Michael's going to the store.") If you can shorten your word choice further, do so. (i.e. "Michael's going shopping.") Focus on making your word usage intentional and as direct as possible. Any elaboration and purple prose can then be sprinkled into your writing after you have finished the draft and seen how many words you still have available. Don't be afraid to be a miser with the words you use. Make a plan and stick to it and you should be fine.

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