: Re: How to represent jealousy in a cute way? The main character (which is a girl) of the first romance I'm writing would feel jealous sometimes of her love interest, but I want it to be a cute

There are so many good answers here. The scenario you are trying to figure out is really a key point to the readers and jealous here makes it even more difficult for author to explain this scene. Myself, I thought of a line which may help you. The main character says:
"Seems like I have to take the responsibility of protecting you like a treasure from the rest of beauties" or something similar.
It is like saying that he is her's treasure and she feels jealous and anxiety whenever someone tries to steal him. I don't think it is excessive as possessive.
It also depends on how the other character takes that. I will be great if you explain his feelings too, for justification of the main character's worries.
I find it as a cute way to express jealous, Thanks.

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