: How do I avoid using to many "I and My in first person narratives To give you a little context below. "Yesterday, I was smiling, and tomorrow, I will try to hold my head up high. But

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I'd recommend that you write your chapters as if you're writing a screenplay. You have to blend the best of third-person narration with the best of first-person narration. In that, you have to try to picture a movie screen and your characters on it, and just add little introspection throughout for that first-person effect. This is what I do and it works.

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