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How does she know that she is falling? Does she feel herself go weightless? Wind blasting her from 'below'? What can she hear? Does she bump into or hit anything on the way down?

If it is dark, then don't make that the whole scene. Embrace her other senses, or her inner thoughts - she has just died. Does she remember her death? How does she react to that? Are her mind or eyes playing tricks on her in the darkness, making phantom visions blink into and out of existence in the corner of her eye?

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