: Do you use past-perfect in narrative to make a reference about a time before the point of narrative? Or is it better to use past simple? I had a question regarding the use of past perfect

I had a question regarding the use of past perfect tense in a narrative that is in past tense. Is it correct to use the past perfect tense for an event that occurred before the point of narrative? Or should you use the past simple form unless two events are being compared and one occurred before the other? As an example:

Coach Rumi leaned back in his seat and looked at the display of medals in his office. When he had started, the team did not have a single national medal to its name.

In this example, I have a question about the second sentence. Should it be:

"When he had started, the team did not have a single medal to its name," (past perfect / past simple) OR
"When he started, the team did not have a single medal to its name," (past simple / past simple) OR
"When he had started, the team had not won a single national medal," (past perfect / past perfect)

Thank you for your help!!

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Given that the narrative is in the past tense, the past perfect is needed to make it clear that you are referring to a time before that past.

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