: How to reveal a secret romantic relationship? So I'm writing an "enemies to lovers" book. My two many characters have hated each other for 7 years, they make a dare to see who can

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Make a list of all the possibilities you can think of. How have you seen secrets being revealed in books, movies, or real life? This could be anything ranging from one of the characters confiding in a friend (and misjudging the friend's ability to keep it to themselves) to the couple being literally caught in the act. At this point, it doesn't matter how believable or even cliché these ideas are. You just need a lot of them.
Go ahead and cut the ones you don't want to write, not because "it's been done before" (you might be able to salvage that) but because it's not how you want the plot/characters to develop. (For example, you may not want to deal with a "sex tape" making the rounds, or a dying parent they could ask for forgiveness and their blessing.)
When you've got a few ideas, play around with the details a bit to add even more options. What if instead of the girl's twin brother, it's the boy's little sister who walks into them kissing? What if instead of a love letter being discovered, it's a letter containing a hurtful joke about the friend crushing on the boy? What if instead of confiding to a friend, one of the characters accidentally lets something slip? What if instead of a extremely public situation, it's just their closest friends who find out? What if instead of the witness immediately concluding that they're secretly dating, they come up with some other explanation? Also, can you combine some ideas? Can you make them even more ridiculous/dramatic/tragic?
Make a plausibility check, and try to come up with explanations for any inconsistencies: If they're usually so careful, what went wrong this time? For some of the options, that might be really hard.
(This is my favourite part of this exercise. It's amazing, really, what kind of "plot holes" can be explained by characters having surprising flaws and weaknesses that can then be fed back into the rest of the story. Whenever my initial reaction was, "But X would never do that!", I've always managed to come up with an explanation that added depth to the character and made the story more interesting.)
Next, for each option on your list, consider your characters. How would they react to such a situation right in the moment? How when they're had more time to process it? While it makes sense to focus on the main characters, make sure to also think how everyone present (or who hears about the incident) would respond. Are the characters reacting with embarrassment or fervent denial? Will they burst into tears, run away, laugh it off, or pretend nothing happened? How do these reactions affect the rest of the scene?
Finally, imagine each possible scene as part of your story. For each option you've written down, check whether the situation itself as well as the outcome fits the tone of your story and the general direction of the plot. Would you rather have a moment of relief when they realize (once they've overcome their initial embarrassment) that their relationship isn't as big of a deal as they feared, or do you want to crank up the tension? Should the couple get closer as a result of their relationship being revealed, or would it work better if they had a fight or even (temporarily) broke up? It really depends on the story.
Cut the ones that you don't want to write, that don't fit the story, or any other reason. Try to flesh out the remaining ones some more, and then pick the one that would work best for the story.

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Make it Painful and awkward:
Cheesy and out-of-place is stock for nice outcomes and happy endings. So if the new relationship is disruptive to a friendship and incredibly painful, then make it so. Reality is messy, complex, and painful. Explore the harm and damage involved in the relationship. Anyone and everyone can potentially be hurt. It's a love triangle because it's drama and conflict. So make the big reveal public, painful, and leaving everyone upset and crying a little. Maybe the secret is poorly kept, and everything comes out at the worst possible time.
Explore the relationships. Does the boy have feelings for the friend (was the friend one of these hook-ups)? It may have meant a lot more to the friend. If I had an enemy, I might try to hook up with her friend to drive a wedge - what happens when you wish you hadn't done that? The girl needs to seriously consider dumping the guy to save the friendship (even if she decides to sacrifice her friend for a guy). The guy might have make awkward promises to the friend - does he fulfill his promises and walk away from true love (like in a Victorian novel)? Does the girl and the friend have romantic history (it IS the 21st century)? There could even have been an awkward three-way that went sour, making everyone come to new conclusions about who they care about. The FRIEND could become the source of rivalry as the former enemies reignite hostilities before coming back together.
Pain and conflict are the sources of drama. Without them, a story is kinda fluff and Christmas special.

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