: Re: How to format the following dialogue without the parenthesis? So the protagonist's boyfriend committed suicide. He left a suicide note. And now the detective is showing it to the protagonist:

Add a little stage direction.

"We read the letter." She had the grace to look a little shamefaced. "Apologies. Standard procedure." He nodded, even if his heart hurt a little to think the cops had read Tom's note. "Nothing inside suggests you're to blame. In fact, Tom didn't leave a reason."

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: She had green eyes is fine. Readers will undersand that her eye color is still the same since, in real life most people's eyes don't change color. Maybe another example will help.

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: Re: How to format the following dialogue without the parenthesis? So the protagonist's boyfriend committed suicide. He left a suicide note. And now the detective is showing it to the protagonist:

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: She had green eyes is fine. Readers will undersand that her eye color is still the same since, in real life most people's eyes don't change color. Maybe another example will help.

: What is the expected target age for a YA (Young Adult) novel? I'm curious about what the expected age for a YA young adult novel is, because it seems to have a huge range. I think most

: Is it correct to use acronyms in a bio or should I omit it? In writing a bio in a technical context, like an author blurb in a publication, should I use acronyms or spell them out? Always?

: What exactly is a copywriter? I have always been puzzled by this, even when reading endless information about it on the internet. Why exactly is it called that, and what's the purpose? That's

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