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Topic : Re: Is the word "becoming" being used correctly in the following metaphor? We kept going until we reached a door. Finally! The corridor was deeper than I thought, like a tunnel. Or the bottom - selfpublishingguru.com

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: Re: Is the word "becoming" being used correctly in the following metaphor? We kept going until we reached a door. Finally! The corridor was deeper than I thought, like a tunnel. Or the bottom

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"becoming" implies an actual change in the form or appearance of the shelves and scrolls. Perhaps you would be better served with...

"serving as"

or

"embodying"

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