: Re: Is the following "shortening" allowed in fiction? I know you can write stuff like this: Head on pillow, I glanced at the clock. My mind made up, I went over to the counter. How
This is well within the bounds of individual style. While not everyone might choose to write in this way, it isn't incorrect and may suit your particular "writer's voice."
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