: Delerium too much like a dream? My novel starts with the character believing she is outside, naked, because she is delerious. After less than a page she realizes where she really is. She

My novel starts with the character believing she is outside, naked, because she is delerious. After less than a page she realizes where she really is. She was delerious because she fainted and she is ill--but will it be seen as too much like a dream sequence?

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@Jamie945

This is a good point, I would try too add more details, trying to make the point that it is not a dream that she is in.

Hope this helps.

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