: How to write a conversation Conversation is the thing I have most difficulties with while writing stories. How do I write a conversation so it will be clear who said what, and in a way that's

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When in a continuing, back and forth dialogue, use boldface everytime you reference the speaker in question (additionally you can secure good formatting by always using NBSPs per speaker reference):

Sailor/Pirate: Hello, scout! Where are you headin', matey?

Ziska: Oh! I was just walking along the pier here to look down at the water.

Sailor/Pirate: Nothing dere to see in these old waters; dead fish, maybe two.

(Just ignore the space formatting that is used above, and imagine them pressed together)

Some people express sentiment of characters this way too (e.g., "Oh! -surprised- I was just walking along the pier here to look down at the water.). Another way you can mix it up and make it less repetitive is by writing it out from a narrative perspective sometimes, and referencing characters as if from a speaker rather than elaborately directed to you (e.g., "You could never do that," said Jane).

Most books do not have a long, endless string of dialogue between characters, so mixing it up is a must.
@Jay 's answer here expresses a perfect example of conversation dialogue that's easily confusable.

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I've wrestled with this too.

Easy part: If you're writing in American English, what the character is saying should be enclosed in double quotes ("). Whenever the speaker changes, start a new paragraph.

I think the hard part is making clear who is speaking. It gets tedious if you constantly write, "Bob said ... Then Mary said ... Then Bob said ..." etc.

Some writers try to vary this up by using words other than "said". Like "Bob said ... Sally replied ... Bob insisted ..." This can work to an extent, but if overdone it starts to look like a gimmick. Especially if you start running out of ways to say "said".

A technique I like is to mix action in with the dialog. This gives you an excuse to identify the speaker while simultaneously breaking up a long string of quotes. Like:

"Did you clean the garage?" Mary asked.
Bob tried to look busy. "Yes, dear."
"You know it's very important that the garage be clean when the realtor arrives." Mary looked stern and concerned.
"I'll clean it now," Bob said sheepishly.

Etc.

Having different speaking styles can work too. The catch to that is if it's too subtle the reader can miss it, and if it's too pronounced, it can look like a gimmick. I've read stories where one character is always sprinkling his statements with Latin or someone is always quoting Shakespeare, and I think it gets stale pretty quickly. You can give a character a distinctive nationality or occupation and use that to dictate how he talks, like the scientist is always using technical terms or the surfer dude is always using beach slang or whatever. But again, if overdone it can get tedious.

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Generally accepted structures, which are used for clarity:

Each time the speaker changes, you start a new paragraph. The speaker
may start and stop, and you can have narration and action tags, but
as long as that person continues, it can be the same paragraph. You
may start a new paragraph with the same speaker if it's clear that the person is continuing to speak, like if the person is giving a
long speech.
Dialogue gets some kind of punctuation to set it off from narration.
This punctuation varies from country to country. Americans use double
quotes ", Brits use single quotes ', the French use guillemets «, and
I've seen various dashes and hyphens.
You should add some kind of tag, speaker or action, any time it's not
clear who is speaking. I wouldn't go more than four or five exchanges
without a tag of some kind, but you might be able to go longer if for
example, there are two people speaking two different languages. When
in doubt, use a tag, and then ask your beta reader or editor if any
can be removed.
Tags can be "he/she," a name, or a descriptor (the doctor, the
detective, the woman, the younger man, the captain, the Vulcan, the
Southerner).

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