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So, this is a third person narrative, and character X knows that Y is not her real father, but the reader doesn't?
I would go with language that matches what the reader knows --i.e., refer to him as "X's father" until you're ready for the reveal.
If it's true third person, you could just call him by his first name, but I can understand if you want to stay a little closer to X's perspective than that.
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