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: Re: Point of view chapter to chapter Would it be more interesting reading a book that switches between 3 character's points of view chapter to chapter or, staying in the main character's mind the
Three first-person POVs might be too much. It's already a little difficult to switch gears when going from one narrator to another; going entirely from one interior perspective to another, and then another, would probably be overwhelming. I wouldn't mind multiple POV characters if the book was in third person, because you're already at a certain remove from the action, so the "camera" is just being shifted to focus on a different actor.
But ultimately it's dependent on the book — it's always possible that you could make it work.
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