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Topic : When having a character ask a question... Okay, which is the proper way of a character asking a question? and why is it better one way vs the other? 1.) "Why is it you always show up when - selfpublishingguru.com

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Okay, which is the proper way of a character asking a question? and why is it better one way vs the other?

1.) "Why is it you always show up when you are not wanted?" he asked.

2.) "Why is it you always show up when you are not wanted?" Areon asked.

3.)"Why is it you always show up when you are not wanted?" asked Areon.

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My opinion, I like stating who's speaking before the "asked" "Said" "stated" "declared" "claimed" or whatever else. like

Susan said
Susan Whined
Susan complained
Susan cried

that's just my taste though. Once you find what works for you then you know, that's your style.

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