Perhaps you could interrupt the dialogue with dashes wherever the action is performed.
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Topic : Re: Mixing dialogue and action in the same paragraph? I know you can add dialogue to the same paragraph as an action to show who's talking, but what happens when a character is making a speech - selfpublishingguru.com