: It's a nice irony, that's all. But to give it depth you have to elaborate on the memory wipe. Are the memories gone forever? In which case the whole ordeal has much less importance to

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It's a nice irony, that's all.

But to give it depth you have to elaborate on the memory wipe. Are the memories gone forever? In which case the whole ordeal has much less importance to the plot than if they could regain their memories back, possibly generating further conflict. Sure they can find out about their past from other people, but since they can't remember it themselves I guess it won't have the same meaning for them. It certainly wouldn't have for me.

The idea of correlating one's memories with their very identities is a nice theme which you could use to your story.

Is a man's identity defined by his memories? If we lose our memories, are we still the same person we were before or are we someone else entirely.

How much one's nature comes into defining who they are?

Are we just the sum of our memories and experiences or are we something more?

Nice themes to consider when writing the story.

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