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Topic : Re: Punctuation before / after em dash and speech mark I originally posted this question on the main English forum, but someone suggested it might be better posted here. Apologies if I have broken - selfpublishingguru.com

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I'd say these are mostly non-standard (not wrong, necessarily, just not the way people usually use this punctuation) so you'll have to make up your own rules for the usage.

Or, alternatively, you could make them standard. To my eye, these could be punctuated with the usual comma/period ending punctuation without losing meaning:

‘Here,’ she said, holding out a small parcel.

‘Come.’ And he beckoned me closer with a finger.

‘Look.’ I lifted my hand and held up the empty bottle.

The final one is the only one that seems to be using the em-dash in the standard way, to indicate an interruption, but in that case, I agree with Lauren that the comma shouldn't be there. I'd also say the second part should be it's own sentence (and I'd change "and" to "but", just... because it makes more sense to me!):

‘Well, I—’ But before I could finish, he’d gone.


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