: My Conflict Doesn't End at the Climax. What can I do? I am currently writing a short book. I've neared the end of the plot, but now I'm seeing a problem: my conflict isn't ending at the

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Two thoughts:

Shift the Magic Flight into the scenes preceding your climax. (In any case, this is where the Magic Flight traditionally pops up.) In your specific case, you could make your hero think about a way out before he finds X. He could prepare an escape mechanism that is simply triggered when he actually does find X. You would not need to tell how the escape is managed, because you have already told it. This would shorten your "post-climax" text considerably. Plus, it could add an interesting doublet of hope/despair to your story, since your hero wants to find X very badly and is blindly following his hope - so much so that he prepares an escape mechanism of which he doesn't even know whether he will need it -, while on the other hand he is never sure he will actually make it to X. The escape mechanism in popcorn entertainment would be to blow up the building. For example.
Hang on. What's the Magic Flight? Glad you asked. The Magic Flight is the stage of a story that propels the hero out of the situation that allowed him to make a crucial change, back into an environment that could be considered his or her everyday life. It is part of the Hero's Journey. Chris Vogler gives a very nice interpretation of the Hero's Journey in his Writer's Journey. In a nutshell, the Hero's Journey describes how a specific change is achieved. In your case, the change would be to save X from the "less than savory characters". The story would traditionally enfold like this*: The hero realizes X needs to be saved and sets out to save X. The hero finds out that he indeed is able to save X. (This is not equal to actually saving X. The term for this point in the story is crisis.) The hero saves X. (Climax.) The last two points do not necessary need to be separated. - A different interpretation would be that saving X is the crisis and making it out of the building - delivering X back into the everyday life - is the climax. What is what in your story depends on your focus.

Hope this helped.

*Mind: The story is not necessarily identical to how you tell your story. You can shuffle the elements of your story around as much as you like, but they will still be there. Otherwise, the story could feel decidedly incomplete, unsatisfying, or, to be traditional here, plain tragic.

P.S.: So why is it called Magic Flight? Read Vogler, or any other of the abundant literature on the Hero's Journey out there. Knowing the Hero's Journey, in any case, turned out to be the one advice on creative writing that really stuck with me over the years. For me, it is indispensable.

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I thought of three things. From least to most appealing:

1. Letting it linger As you say, once person X is found, the story is complete. You can write an epilogue like you mentioned, but you can also just leave it blank-- either stylistically, or with a hint that there is a "part 2" yet forthcoming. This is common in fantasy and sci-fi series, but as a short story? Doesn't seem like your best option

2. Multiple orgasms Perhaps a two-chapter escape sequence will give you a chance to build a second climax over the first. However, I'd try to keep the melodrama of the first climax to a minimum. And the second better be pretty mind-blowing to make it work.

3. Build it up You can rewrite parts of the beginning to establish a definitive bad guy. Protagonist and person X proceed to eviscerate him after X is found which results in their escape. That way, her discovery also closes out the other subplots.

Let's see what others come up with ...

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When your givens are a problem, change your givens.

Your protagonist wants to get Ms. X out of the building alive. He may find her, but they both still have to get out alive. So:

Is she wounded? Did the bad guys shoot her or cut her up? Is she having seizures or does she urgently need medication?
Is the building full of the bad guys who are shooting at them and
could kill either of them?
Did the bad guys chase the protagonist into the building and are busy
trying to kill them?
Is the building rickety, old, or falling apart such that just exiting
the building is a life-threatening exercise?
Is the building on fire?
Does it have to be a building? Could they be on a (sinking) boat, or
a collapsing cave?
Is Ms. X a dedicated cop or other LEO who is insisting on taking down
the bad guys herself, and will stay in the building shooting the bad
guys herself rather than escaping?

You see my point. Merely finding Ms. X alive is not, in fact, the end of the conflict. That only ends when the two of them are safe and free of the bad guys. I might even venture that the conflict only ends when the bad guys are arrested or dead, or otherwise stopped from pursuing the protagonist and Ms. X.

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