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You could just make him paranoid, or suspicious, he may not know it yet but he has this gut feeling that he is in danger, his senses are always alert and it seems like danger is lurking in the shadows.
He thinks he's just being paranoid but as time passes he comes to realize that his sixth sense was actually right, Tom Clancy style.

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