: Re: How realistic should dialogue and character voices be? I've heard a lot of conflicting suggestions in the past regarding dialogue, so I'm hoping I can get a solid answer here. Some people have

OK, I'll try:

"Stormy! Oh my gosh, it is so good to see you! ... Stormy?"

Stormy opened her mouth as if to speak but nothing came out. She half-heartedly smiled in recognition of her friend's greeting only to look down towards her toes.

"Stormy, is something wrong?" Ginger asked.

"Well, it's just that, I don't know ..."

"How about if we just start with hello?"

"OK," Stormy said with an ounce of confidence. "I think I can handle that: Hey, Ginger. It's sort of good to see you."

"Sort of?! Now you're gonna have to tell me why you're freaked; otherwise I'm gonna be upset."

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: Making modern references I'm working on a modern fiction drama in an urban setting. I'm trying to be real in terms of conversation threads--music, movies, drugs, etc. Here's my problem: I've

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