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: Re: A Background Voice Heard Over A Phone There's a running dialogue between two of my characters. However, I am not using INTERCUT and only one of the two characters will be in frame. The other

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The correct way to do this depends who we are watching. Assuming we are looking at Jane..

Jane is on the phone talking to Michael.

JANE
Fine, I'll see you on Thursday.

MICHAEL (V.O.)
(filtered)
I'm looking forward to it.

Jane hears ANOTHER WOMAN'S VOICE close to Michael.

JANE
Who the hell is there with you?

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