: Re: Coming up with names for 4 children I am looking for character names to design a personality for 4 children in my story.

What type of candy is it? Are there different flavors? Were the candies the same that all four kids ate?

You could do different colors/flavors perhaps. And the different flavors make for different superpowers.

Here are some ideas:

Red Juiceberry
Turquoise Taffy
Green Slimesuck
Crack Caramel
Red Poprock
Roasted Poprock
Salted Chew
Sweet Purpleblast
Flavorblast

Are these what you're looking for? The candies could also bring out the kids' natural personalities. For example, if one of the kids had a bad temper, it could enhance that trait and make him extremely fiery (lots of attitude, anger issues, etc.).

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