: How Do I Write a News Broadcast Montage in Different Locations in a Screenplay? I want to write a sequence in my screenplay where the same news broadcast continues on different screens in different
I want to write a sequence in my screenplay where the same news broadcast continues on different screens in different locations. For example, a bunch of people in a bar are watching the broadcast, then it continues in a family's living room on their TV, then people on the street are watching the same broadcast on a TV in a shop window, etc. How should I format this in a screenplay?
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Something like this:
INT. BAR - NIGHT
The USUAL CROWD watches NEWS on TV.
TV NEWS WOMAN
Breaking News: Mayor Doyle arrested
for drunk driving after crashing into…
CUT TO:
INT. SMITH FAMILY ROOM - NIGHT
The broadcast continues as the 3 Smiths and Fido all watch the same broadcast.
TV NEWS WOMAN( CON’TD )
…into Grant’s Tomb, knocking over the
150 yr old statue of the General. The Mayor’s
car burst into flames shortly after the Mayor
was pulled from the wreckage by…
CUT TO:
INT. LAST TV STORE IN AMERICA - NIGHT
Metropolis CITIZENS watch the broadcast through the store window.
TV NEWS WOMAN( CONT’D. )
Superman! The Caped Crusader was unavailable
for further comment. The Mayor, however, called
a four hour news conference to blame the car maker,
the bartender, the liquor company and the statue.
According to The Hollywood Standard by Christopher Riley (2nd Edition, pages 54-56), the simplest way to set up montages is with a scene heading of MONTAGE or SERIES OF SHOTS followed by the content separated into paragraphs. (Or including dialogue as follows):
KEVIN'S APARTMENT - MONTAGE
Kevin makes the bed.
KEVIN (V.O.)
There's something about cleaning that calms me down.
He dusts the bookshelf.
KEVIN (V.O.) (CONT'D)
It relaxes me.
Or, if you don't think that looks very organized, you may include scene headings for each shot.
KEVIN'S APARTMENT - MONTAGE
A) INT. BEDROOM - DAY
Kevin makes the bed.
KEVIN (V.O.)
There's something about cleaning that calms me down.
B) INT. LIVING ROOM - DAY
He dusts a bookshelf.
KEVIN (V.O.) (CONT'D) It relaxes me.
Notice that the action is indented to the level of the heading and not flush with the left edge.
Of course, the dialogue is still formatted the same way as normal.
A note about "CONTINUOUS":
Continuous is ONLY used when you are following the character through to a new location. Do not use it when you are indicating something is happening at the same time in a different location. If your character walks outside and we follow, then it is continuous. If he or she walks outside and we stay inside for a moment before cutting to the character, it is not continuous. (This is something that gets misused a lot in screenplays.)
If it's a spec script and breaking it down into multiple scenes would be unnecessarily burdensome on the reader, you may simply write:
INT/EXT. - MONTAGE
TVs around the world, in bars, homes, and storefronts relay the same news story.
REPORTER
You join me live at Houston Mission
Control where we await contact from
the brave astronauts...
Then relate the story as if it were happening on a single screen.
In a later production draft it might get broken into individual scenes for the sake of scheduling, or it may not. This could be filmed outside the main production schedule, in which case it might have its own documentation and not rely on the script for a clear breakdown.
Expanding a bit now I'm on a proper keyboard:
If you want to add a little more colour into each of your locations, or you want to use any of the cast characters it's safest to break up into different scenes.
INT. BOSTON BAR -- DAY
In a Boston bar, six alcoholics stare at the TV through glassy eyes.
REPORTER
You join me live at Houston Mission
Control...
EXT. HARRODS LONDON -- NIGHT
An old couple hold each other tight watching the same report on a TV in the window.
REPORTER (cont'd)
...where we await contact from the
brave astronauts...
Some scripts will use CONTINUOUS as the tag on the second scene. eg.
EXT. HARRODS LONDON -- CONTINUOUS
But in this example, doing that hides the fact the second scene is at night, which is likely to be far more useful for a reader to know. The fact the scene is continuous should be obvious already.
Note you may need to add the "cont'd" manually to the dialogue since your screenwriting software will not do this automatically across scenes.
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