: Re: How do you describe someone approaching and calling out at the same time without using different font sizes? So i have this As Fate's worry grew and grew something drew her attention to a

@Shanna875

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In general, the author doesn't specify type sizes. That's something you'd have to negotiate with your publisher, but it can come across as gimmicky.

In your case, I'd recommend simply deleting the long spoken noise. It doesn't help us understand what's going on here. Just write the action.

(Also, *its.)

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