: Re: Need help with hospital dialogue I'm writing a story where the main character gets burned pretty badly. He's admitted into the hospital, and he's on a trolley, which is moving. He just got

I really like writing hospital scenes. Can't help with the treatment, but from my experience there are two types of doctors:

The sugarcoat
These tend to have dialogue like "You'll be just fine!" and "It's not even that bad!"
The honest one
These people will tell it as it is, no doubt about it. They cut right to the point, and will not lie about the patients condition.

From my experience, every hospital has one of each. Which one your character will get, you choose.

Hope this helped!

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