: When should a chapter end? When writing a novel, when should I end a chapter? Note that I'm not talking about chapter word-count (that topic was discussed here). I'm interested to know when

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This is what I used when we starting building a writing software:
1. The concept of chapter is only used to split the book for the benefit of the reader.
2. When you write your book you split the book in scenes (the smallest unit) with a location, POV, MRU structure.
3. Every scenes is on average 900 words. At the end you might split it in chapter to have an equal number of scenes per chapter and also according to the meaning that a group of scenes have.

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Remember the guideline about every "scene" has to contribute to the overall story you're trying to tell. Any chapter that doesn't further the overall story in some way should be cut.

This means that every chapter has a little part of the story to tell. And as soon as the chapter has told its part of the story, it should end.

I disagree about keeping them all a standard length. Just like every scene in a movie can be a different length, every chapter in a book can be a different length. Short chapters can just add a detail or two, but important scenes will have more to say and may take longer to say it.

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In a recent Writing Excuses podcast, Mary Robinette Kowal suggests that chapters are about pacing. This resonated with me (and with Howard Tayler, as you'll hear in the podcast).

When I think about pacing, I think about answering the reader's questions and provoking new questions. There are various levels of story question (beat, scene, chapter) depending on the significance of the question to the overall story goal.

So a good place to end a chapter is with an event that creates a significant shift in the reader's questions. This doesn't mean cliffhangers, necessarily, but some significant shift.

Here are some ways to shift the reader's questions:

Raise a new question. Introduce a new puzzle or mystery. Introduce a new character with conflicting goals. Create a conflict with an ally.
Answer a question in a way that raises a new question. Reveal information. Show that the problem is more complex that was apparent. Eliminate, undermine, or thwart the MC's most promising option.
Increase the significance of a question that's already on the reader's mind. Raise the stakes. Shorten the deadline.

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Another important aspect is to make sure that your chapters are of relatively the same length. Just a tip, but it sucks when you have a chapter like 30 pages long, then another like 60 pages long. "If your chapters are inconsistent, your readers gunna have a bad time."

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The last line or lines should have some reason for being there. They can:

be suspenseful ("What are you doing
here?")
be funny ("Tinkerty-tonk," I said,
and I meant it to sting.)
close a scene (She slammed the door
behind her, hard enough to make the
glass rattle in the windowpanes.)
bring resolution to an arc of any
size (He held John's eyes for a long
moment, then leaned over and kissed
him full on the mouth.)

but don't end mid-thought or mid-scene arbitrarily.

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I would say at the point where you estimate your reader will get to the full stop, curse your name, curse your family's name, swear under their breath and, wearily ignoring the clock telling them they have to be up in four and a half hours for work, mumble: "Go on then, just one more chapter." before looking across to the beginning of the next chapter.

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Follow the standard plot arc: conflict, rising action, and resolution. This is often used to describe plots across a whole novel, but it is equally applicable to a single scene. Each scene needs a conflict of some kind, and the action in that scene will flow from this conflict. When the conflict is resolved (temporarily or permanently), the scene is over.

There is often only a single scene per chapter, but you might put several scenes in the same chapter if they are closely related, or if they illustrate some larger arc of conflict and resolution.

Alternately, some authors choose to end a chapter right before the resolution. When done well, this can add suspense and keep the reader flipping pages.

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