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: Re: Habitual use of -ing follows -ed -- is this wrong? I have recently noticed that I consistently follow an -ed clause with further action or elaboration using -ing. I feel like something is wrong
This structure isn't bad itself, the problem may appear if you overuse it. Remember that diversity is key if you want to keep your reader's attention and give your text a pleasant rythm.
I once read a fiction in which the overuse of this scheme was so extrem that it was painful to read. Because you are essentially stopping the action to look at the consequences. I'd say you should avoid using this structure twice in a row, as it slows down the pace.
So no, it's not inherently bad to use this construction. You have to be aware of the effect it produces and use it accordingly.
Ask for feedback from honest third party and see what they think about your text. Put it aside for a few months and then read it again. See if your text needs some rewriting or not.
You could also do some research by reading works from several different authors, professionals and amateur.
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