: Re: Structuring a sentence with two phrases qualifying the same ending For a long time, I have wondered which way of writing the following is correct. (Is more than one correct?) The expected result

To answer your question: all of your examples are grammatically correct. (Well done!)

However, in most contexts, clarity and readability are even more important than grammatical correctness. By that measure, your third example is definitely the best, as Lauren has explained so well.

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