: Re: Please help me improve this sentence... In a first-person narrative, I’d like to use the following sentence: It took me nearly a decade to write this script, and now I’d pitch it to
Ten years of windup. Today was the pitch. I was going to throw Hollywood a curve ball like they'd never seen.
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