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@Debbie451

There are different types of critique/editing, and different benchmarks for each.

There is content editing, which can be more easily called critique, which deals with the actual story. Then there is line editing, also called proofreading.

You should first do your own line editing or proofreading to make the story as clean and legible as possible. A first draft can be rough, but it shouldn't be incoherent. That means spellchecking, correcting grammar, and generally correcting punctuation. If you know you have a problem with, say, comma splices, it's fair to ask someone to look over your manuscript just for syntax errors so that you can reach the next level.

That level is content editing, or critique. Your manuscript is ready for the story to be discussed when you feel like you really can't improve it any more without outside opinions, or in the case of a first draft when you're just sick of looking at it and you need to hand it off already.

If you are working one-on-one with a regular editor (that is, someone who looks at your writing regularly), it's okay for a first draft to have chunks of TK scenes — spots where you say "John waits for Mary in the aquarium with a loaded gun, she shows up and makes threats, and eventually he has to shoot her" and then take up from the next scene. That tells your editor what you want to accomplish even if you're not there yet. I wouldn't recommend this if it's your first time working with this person, or to do this with a larger group unless the group is okay with that kind of hole. But generally, you should have a complete, reasonably clean draft to present for content critique.

@Looi5811334

Many of these answers are wonderful for determining when a work itself is ready for critique, but I think an additional metric should be added: Am I ready to receive criticism? If receiving negative feedback on this work would enrage you or make you burst into tears, you are not ready.

I find this is most often a problem for new writers and writers who are writing based on real experiences, but I will sometimes have issues with this myself if I'm having an "this sucks, therefore I suck" kind of day, or with my poetry, which I use as an emotional outlet. Sometimes I just need a day or so worth of distance before I'm ready to let someone else touch my work, even after taking time to edit and polish it as much as I can on my own.

So ask yourself how you would respond to truly biting criticism. If your first instinct involves refusing to change anything at all or scrapping everything, you probably need to create some emotional distance from your writing before you are ready for a critique.

@Sims2267584

Everyone else has great answers, but I'm eager to add my thoughts.

How do you know if you're ready?

There are two major factors which I think tie into being ready for criticism.

You think you're crafted of diamonds and your ink is molten gold.

I believe that if you think your writing is some of the best around when it hasn't been looked over by another, you're wrong. You need to be criticised and have other people look at your work because they might have different beliefs to you. One of my favourite parts about English Literature is hearing other people's interpretations. It's essential to hear other people's interpretations of your work rather than your own all the time.

You can't see what's wrong.

Once again, it's the same as the last one. If you physically think your work is perfect but still haven't got it critiqued, you need it critiqued. It's all about hearing other people's interpretations.

Before you do final edits and polishes.

This is what I do whenever I write anything. Even if it's a short story that I'm never going to publish, I edit it several times and give it to someone who can critique me. It's good practice. I think the best time to give your work to someone to critique, in my experience, is before the final edits. With what you learn from the critique, you are able to apply that in your work and improve it as much as possible in the final revisions of the manuscript.

How do you know if you're not ready?

There are grammar issues.

This is a huge one for me. I have been asked to look over people's work before, and within the first 500 words there's at least one spelling mistake/grammar mistake. Comma splicing can be a very big issue if you do not identify it. When you actually do try and get published, if you have issues with grammar and spelling you're going to be put to the side. If you're trying to get critiqued, you don't want to critique to revolve around your grammar and spelling, rather the writing. It's so important to get rid of as many issues like these as you can to get the most out of your critique. Removing grammar and spelling issues also assists in getting your meaning across clearly.

You haven't edited.

This is quite self-explanatory and ties into the last one. If your work is unedited it will be of exceptionally low quality and unable to impress anyone. There will probably be ten thousand comma splices, five hundred spelling typos, six hundred little places where it loses flow. Also, if you're wondering why I comment on spliced commas, I have an issue with them so I have to pay immense amounts of attention to them during editing stages to make sure I haven't a single one in the finished product.

Conclusion

Getting critiques can be really exciting because you're able to hear other people's interpretations of your work. If you think your work is gold without any critiques, then you're wrong. It only appeals to you and not others.

I hope this helped.

@Karen856

The experience of a writer dictates their ability to gauge when they are ready to be critiqued and when they are not. This means that beginners, should try to get critiqued as soon and often as possible, since that will help them learn what they lack quickly and also about the process to get feedback, specially when they are ready for it.

However, there is an exception to this rule of thumb: When you feel that your experience grants you immunity to criticism then you are back to the starting point. You need to be critiqued as soon and often as possible.

Having said that, receiving critique is not the same as proof-reading. At the beginning, there will be instances when the aspiring writers will have to be reminded of that and there will be some when that's all that they will get (a proof-reading) which will prompt them to challenge themselves to improve their mastery of their language in order to thrive in the craft.

@Shanna875

A wise teacher told me that any critique has to come with instructions for the reader. Do you want me to give you a high-level review to make sure you're on a good track? Do you want a sentence-level proofing to check for grammar and spelling? Do you want to just be told you're brilliant with no other critique? (I've asked for this on pieces that I don't want to mess with anymore.)

So, to answer your question, I'd say that a piece can be critiqued at any point, whether it's a final draft or a first draft or a smattering of scenes in search of a plot. Though it depends on your group and your intentions for it.