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Topic : Re: Critique of short essay Basically I need some critics regarding the following points: Does this description essay archive its goal (a creepy story with a 'sappy' ending)? How is the 'rhythm' of - selfpublishingguru.com

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Just some remarks:

Were you really touching any corpse, anytime? Because this metaphor smells foul.

"Alone in the dark". I think it is a cliche. It is the name of well known legend among computer games, so this phrase induces feelings of a dangerous situation, not loneliness, loss and deprivation.


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