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Debbie451

: Re: Is it plausible for a narrator to "hear" and describe sounds which would normally be out of earshot? Found myself in a bit of a logical pickle in regard to the below piece: The number

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for the sake of extra detail

There's your problem.

Don't add extra detail which your POV character can't perceive. Find someplace else to put the pretty phrase or leave it in your slush file.

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