: Re: Ways to replace "Then, ..." I find myself writing "Then, ..." a lot. Example: As soon as she found my letter---or rather, Kiyoshi's---she widened her slitted eyes and pressed the letter

Just drop 'em.

...she... pressed the letter against her chest. As though she were handling
a delicate glass sculpture, she opened the envelope.

Mr. HSC squinted his slanted eyes at me. Setting down his chef
hat on the counter, he said...

I answered her smile with my own. Receiving her apple, I asked
her, "So, what now?"

(Example 3 sounds better with a "then," though.)

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