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Topic : Re: 'Filling' up a school setting without making a bunch of new characters? In a school setting, what is a way to allude that a school is full of students, without making new characters or overusing - selfpublishingguru.com

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This is why the clique system is such a wonderful tool for authors. For any group that tends to hang out you only need to ever name one or two of the most prominent members, and then describe actions of those groups by reference to those members. Compare:

"Harold, Mike, Jules, Ron, Gregor and Paul were being rowdy as usual"

"Harold and his cronies were being rowdy as usual"

Because, for better or for worse, schools tend fall apart into groups. Use that.


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