: Constant switching between third-person and character thoughts is definitely considered bad style (advice taken from here: http://www.amazon.com/Write-Novel-Them-Misstep-Misstep/dp/0061357952, funny and

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Constant switching between third-person and character thoughts is definitely considered bad style (advice taken from here: www.amazon.com/Write-Novel-Them-Misstep-Misstep/dp/0061357952, funny and useful book btw)

However, if you are telling someone's story throughout the novel - then is acceptable if you would also write down the protagonist's thoughts.

If you write several character thoughts constantly the reader might start feeling like he's going mental :)

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