: Re: How to write long conversation of (whispers) when screenwriting? If you have a conversation of whispering in a screenplay do you have to put: BATHSHEBA (whispers) Beneath each characterâ€™s

Use parentheticals to establish that each character is whispering. It should then be implied that they continue in the same mode until one of them speaks up â€” at which point, you likewise establish that they speak up.

BATHSHEBA
(whispers)
How should I introduce you?

JOHN
(whispers)
By my name.

BATHSHEBA
Right. Makes sense.

JOHN
Yeah...

BATHSHEBA
(speaks up)
Hey, Larry, this is John.

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