: Re: If my main character gets powerful for each emotional trauma,How do i describe it? My main character gets more strength for each emotional trauma he face it,But his mind gets massive damage

@Miguel976

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Okay, with the information that I have gathered, he's fragile, the love of his life broke him and his kind is being slaughtered. He sounds like he's got it rough. You said that you wanted to describe his mental trauma like scars. Think of it like this; Have you ever had a headache so bad that you could hardly talk? Have you ever had a fever so bad that you're sweating profusely even though you're freezing? Have you ever been hit in the head with a ball? (by accident while playing a sport or just being in the way at the wrong time).

Imagine all that pain and put it into words.

"My head throbbed as if a thousand tiny feet were kicking my skull from the inside, sweat ran down my forehead in rivulets and the heat - oh the heat. It felt as though I was running a marathon in the scorching desert, it was humid and I could hardly breathe."

Description is key. The more you add, the more of an image you create.
I hope this helps!

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