: Re: Skipping telling to get to the showing - pros and cons In my style of writing, I often find that I lapse into relating what happens or has happened, usually via short, choppy, dead sentences.

Unless something possibly interesting happened while she was KO'd, I wouldn't worry too much about it. Maybe instead of being told there's an inspection, she could wake up during it, and she can learn of it at the same time as the reader.

Alternatively, maybe just avoid the whole issue by only having the blow stun her? She could be dragged, dazed to the inspection.

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