: Re: How to write a board game scene? My book is about a girl who is a compulsive gambler, and I'm trying to write a scene where she is playing a board game with an old dude who also has a

@Caterina108

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Show their emotions while they're playing. Is she about to make a move but is hesitant?

Why is she, though?

How does the older man look?

Nervous, excited?

Show the reader what she is thinking, the old man's body language.

Are there noises around them?

Any lights or is it dim and hard to see the cards?

People watching?

How does it make her feel to have eyes on her?

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