: Re: How to "Show" and not "Tell" for nervousness? I was told to ask this question here. There’s a saying in writing to “show; don’t tell”. For example, instead of naming the emotion, “She

@Kimberly114

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Since people have already posted answers about the general "show don't tell" method I'll try to put the focus more on a specific answer for your problem.

I'd say start with thinking about your character. So she or he is nervous. How would they act? Would they start fidgeting? Maybe try giving a glimpse into their thoughts: the questions that are running through their mind.

I personally (but this is just me and my weirdness) would research what ticks people show when they get nervous and pick one or two that suit your character.

I hope this helps.

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