: Re: How do I write thought battles? I'd like to write a scene where my character is thinking back and forth between decisions, and I'm not sure what the correct way is. Do I write all of his

@Shanna875

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I have this self-conflicting problem too. What I generally do is this:

Should I ask them?
Nahhhh, they'll say no.
But what if they don't?
Do I have a chance?

And this leads the character to do the thing in the end. The action is always going to come after the conflict, no matter what. The ending may turn good for the character, or it could go splendidly. The whole thing asking if they will do it. Not will they not do it.

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