: Re: How to remove generalizations from a sentence? Iâ€™m writing a paper and I have these sentences that are a bit problematic. I feel they generalize a bit and could be rewritten in less words.

I'm seeing three big generalizations there :

Women want to have a baby
Women want to be with a guy
Money is important in relationships

Any one of those will alienate a significant part of an audience.

If you're looking for a variation on the old idiom "marry in haste, repent at leisure" (which avoids generalization of specific groups by being entirely general), a search on the phrase should give some nice alternative ways of expressing the same concept.

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