: Re: How can you explain Scenery? I am writing a story about a character that travels as an ESL teacher and am wondering how you can explain scenery without getting to much into it.

@Steve161

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In addition to character thoughts (Boondoggle's answer was a good one), you could relate the landscape to plot :

He could see a figure making its way along a track where the forest
gave way to open moorland.

But if you're doing that, the figure (or the track) should reappear in the story - the reader will be expecting them.

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