: Help me rewrite this sentence I would like help re-writing this sentence. I would like the overall tone of the language kept intact, and I would like it to be as concise, eloquent and well

I would like help re-writing this sentence. I would like the overall tone of the language kept intact, and I would like it to be as concise, eloquent and well written as possible.

In the event you feel like that this study is not a match for your qualification, ...

I have come up with two versions:

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In the event you feel that this study is not a match for your qualification, ...

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In the event you feel this study is not a match for your qualification, ...

Does either of these have an advantage over the other? Is there another, better way to write it and meet the goals I've given?

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@Rivera824

If your qualifications don't match this study,...

If this study does not match your qualifications,...

But wait, how could a study truly match someone's qualifications?

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@Merenda569

"If you are unqualified [ or overqualified or underqualified ] for this study ... "

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@Correia211

If you don't feel you qualify for this
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