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Topic : Re: What is a good "to be" verb substitute in this scenario? My teacher does not like "to-be verbs" (is, are, etc.) to be used in our sentences. Here is the section in question: A significant - selfpublishingguru.com

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A significant scene in the novel occurs after ...

Or

A significant scene in the novel takes place after ...

Or

A significant scene in the novel follows [the previous reference action] ...

All of these will read the same way; A follows B, A occurs after B, A takes place after B, etc. There are probably many ways to say "First X, then Y".


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